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How can I see the the second part of  Orc massage scene?

Hello, Juan. Thank you for your patience. To watch the second part of the 'Orc Massage Scene', you need to have the minimum requirements. You can check this information by talking to Brimon after you unlock the first scene or you can check it below. [Stamina 7, Desire more or equal 310, Trust less or equal 89]

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You have a very nice game here, but a couple of things. 

1. WAAAAY too much information at the start. You might want to think about starting the daring duo off at the inn and then drip feed information to players as they explore the town at will. This way they aren't bombarded with line after line after line. of text, of which most doesn't really matter. Like Saint Cer? I assume that's the deity of the world?! That can be  found out by talking to an NPC, maybe even doing a quest to find a lost necklace bearing this saint's image and getting backstory on it. 


1a - Also, you may want to explain or show some backstory on the pair so the players feel attached to them. This could be done in a number of ways, but an easy way is to show their lives before they got together in 'flashback' scenes.

My favorite game does this several times. 


2. Tone down the orc enemies. A good rule of thumb is that you should be able to defeat most enemies in about 3-4 shots of your regular weapon strikes. I was using the spider guy's special skill and still couldn't one shot them. So this made fights more of a drag than a joy. 

3. You may want to create other items for the players to find in the dungeons, because all I found was vegetables and if I could buy them then there was no point to searching for them.

4. EXPAND THE DUNGEONS!! Narrow corners are fine when you don't have visible enemies on the screen, but with visible ones it becomes more of a chore to move around them. 

5. Not sure about this since I could only get to level 5, but are you going to have a boss monster on every 10th floor? If so, then that's fine, but if you aren't then you should have some kind of barrier every 5 floors to make it so that the play has something to engage with, because after the first few fights I blew through the dungeon just to see what else was ahead.

6. Personal note: Let the Wolf go into the dungeon. I want to fight as the pupper! <3

7. You've got very good designs for the town, though some of the animals don't make sounds, like the horse during and such. Not sure if that was by choice or not, but just thought you should know.

8. More varied enemies. I know you just started, but perhaps mix it up with three enemy types. Orcs - Bats - Spirits, that way the players have some variety to fight against.

9. Lower the player level and give them a chance to build up the wolf/spider guy's strength, that way they feel attached to them. 

10. More varied skillz, please. Since the spider guy seems like a rogue/assassin, probably give him skills to weaken enemy stats and inflict status ailments and darkness based spells. While giving the wolf guy buffing and healing and holy skills, that way the dichotomy between them can be more varies.

11. Ultimate skills - If you're going for 100TP then you should make sure that this skill can do extreme damage because most fights ended before I could get them to this number. 

11a. Perhaps give both of them Super + Extreme skills at around 30 - 60TP respectively, this way you can show off their personalities through these skills. I.e - Spider Guy - Ravenous Web (A Super Skill which stuns on enemy and drains HP) Dead Man's Touch (An Extreme Skill which does x3 damage but has a high chance to kill none boss enemies)

 You're doing a great job over all. The music and feel is great. Keep it up!

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THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZING FEEDBACK, KDMI'll start to work on it right now! Also, I appreciate that because I'm a solo developer, and there are some things that escape me while I'm developing and managing the whole project. I hope in the next version some of your suggestions will be implemented. Thank you for your patience [I was on a trip].

If you want some help + guide then I can give you my discord. 

I'm working on my own games, so I know that an extra brain can help with the creativity! 

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I'll be glad if you can send me your Discord! Also, I've already played Broken Chains, and I'm looking forward to updates! It's a lovely game =]

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Any plans for an android version?

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Not yet. :(

does that mean in the future there will be?

For this one specific, I don't think so. But I hope to have some news soon!

does that mean in the future there will be?

please finish this game. please. i love. how do drink pinga

I'll finish it!!!